I'd be stunned speechless, but then I couldn't gush to you how utterly wonderful this is. You captured so much of both the characters, and had them say so much with so little. I love Lana's honesty about her jealousy of Lois, even with her acceptance. Also, Oliver with his lingering self-doubts and insecurities in relationship to Clark. Brilliant.
Destiny crashed over us like a great wave, and neither of us could swim against it for long."
That sound? My heart breaking - but in a good and satisfied way.
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Re: the things which might have been
Date: 2010-07-06 05:00 am (UTC)Destiny crashed over us like a great wave, and neither of us could swim against it for long."
That sound? My heart breaking - but in a good and satisfied way.
Thank you so so much, my talented friend. *hugs*
I hope you don't mind me pimping this.